Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
As the standard of living has continued to improve year after year, art has assumed a significant role in our daily lives. Consequently, there are some who argue that art is indeed esstential to human existence, while others hold a contrary viewpoint. Personally, I firmly believe that human cannot live without art, and there are several reasons to support this assertion.
The main reason why art is undoubtedly a basic necessity is because it provides a form of emotional and psychological expression and release, enabling individuals to explore and process their feelings. Art serves as an outlet for self-expression in a way that words alone cannot always convey. For example, people often hang paintings on the walls of their home to alleviate stress and create a unique ambiance, or listen to music to soothe the anxieties. In essense, engaging with art can be a form of therapy, allowing individual to examine and cope with their emotions, reduce stress, and enhance their overall well-being.
Furthermore, art stimulates innovation and creativity. It pushes the boundaries of what is deemed possible and inspires new ideas and perspectives. Take graffiti art, for instance, which was initially created to embellish the dull walls with vibrant and meaningful expressions, encouraging the young people to develop their own identities distint from their parents' generation. Artistic creativity can also extend into other domains of life, such as science, technology, and business, igniting innovation and progress in these fields.
In conclusion, the importance of art cannot be understated. Art has the power to enrich our lives, express our emotions, inspire innovation and creativity. Regardless of whether we deem it essential or not, it is indisputable that art plays a vital role in human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37192982456 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99414427996 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645614035088 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8552631217 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199342813933 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622156918156 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375001252298 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111673675457 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00806586611064 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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