Write a paragraph of about 150 words to answer the following question.
What skills do students need to learn to prepare for their future careers?
To be well-prepared for their future careers, students need to be equipped with a number of important skills. Firstly, it is advisable for them to master technology skills such as word processing and emailing. This is because almost all jobs on the market involve working with a computer, so being computer literate can help students to boost their work productivity. Secondly, students need to acquire time management skills as well. The reason for this is that knowing how to prioritize tasks, set realistic deadlines and allocate time efficiently, students can handle their assignments effectively, avoid being stressed out by heavy workloads and maintain a work-life balance. Last but not least, they should develop their communication skills. This can not only help them to articulate clearly in group meetings and presentations, but also build a good rapport with their boss and colleagues, thus promoting a pleasant working environment. In conclusion, it is essential for students to acquire computer, time management and communication skills before embarking on their careers to enter their future jobs confidently and successfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07216071008 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9393604665 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227142217348 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107641719534 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677767400167 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227142217348 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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