Write a paragraph about the drawbacks of working mothers.
Being a working mother can present a number of disadvantages. First of all, women’s traditional roles are housewives and housekeepers, which means that their main responsibilities are nuturing children and handling household chores. In addition, in extended families where more than two generations live under the same roof, women usually act as the main caregivers for elderly people. Secondly, having heavy tasks at work and at home to shoulder on, women may not have sufficient time to take care of themselves. While men work at office, women work both at the office and at home. Therefore, it is likely that working mothers may constantly suffer from stress and exhaustion, damaging both their physical and mental health. Last but not least, working mothers may not be good workers. Unless working mothers can maintain work-life balance, both their work can be negatively affected. Worries about kids and tiring household chores can cause women to be unable to concentrate on their work or achieve their highest levels of productivity. In conclusion, women should not pursue a career after matrimony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28977272727 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82864968479 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0643554568 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207203036617 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933984902542 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758769143253 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207203036617 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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