Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Based on some opinions of the people, the government should provide for the students who wish to enter and study in universities. I believe that education should always be accessible to everyone, especially the underprivileged that is why I strongly agree that the government should pay for the pupils' enrollment fees.
Education system and universities are expensive nowadays, as the prices of all the goods in the market increases every year so does enrollment fees joins in the same trend, and not only that there are lots of projects and activities that are very costly for the parents or the working students to afford. There is also another problem such as universities offering only a few limited slots for scholarship programs and even sometimes not all schools are able to provide for that reason few entry students would be privileged for this option.
Parents are even struggling to send their children for schooling so some of the students do not succeed anymore in stepping into college. While others make their own way by getting student loans or working while studying so these are some of the problems that students are facing rather than focusing on their studies.
Meanwhile, only the privileged students instead of all are able to enter college and universities. For these reasons it is good if the government will step up by increasing its allocated budget for education and make it free for all students in that way it will be fair for those who really desire to study. The government should think of the youth as an investment that will help them eventually in the growth and development of their country in the future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pupils'' or 'pupil's'?
Suggestion: pupils'; pupil's
... that the government should pay for the pupils enrollment fees. Education system an...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld pay for the pupils enrollment fees. Education system and universities are ex...
^^
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fee'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: fee
...increases every year so does enrollment fees joins in the same trend, and not only t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s would be privileged for this option. Parents are even struggling to send thei...
^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...to send their children for schooling so some of the students do not succeed anymore in step...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... or working while studying so these are some of the problems that students are facing rathe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rather than focusing on their studies. Meanwhile, only the privileged students ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while, even so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91726618705 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68755111723 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0883414792 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.888888889 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287497205627 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121523232002 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645698679939 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179134792374 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742035481829 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pupils'' or 'pupil's'?
Suggestion: pupils'; pupil's
... that the government should pay for the pupils enrollment fees. Education system an...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld pay for the pupils enrollment fees. Education system and universities are ex...
^^
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fee'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: fee
...increases every year so does enrollment fees joins in the same trend, and not only t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s would be privileged for this option. Parents are even struggling to send thei...
^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...to send their children for schooling so some of the students do not succeed anymore in step...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... or working while studying so these are some of the problems that students are facing rathe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rather than focusing on their studies. Meanwhile, only the privileged students ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while, even so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91726618705 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68755111723 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0883414792 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.888888889 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287497205627 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121523232002 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645698679939 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179134792374 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742035481829 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.