It is argued that teachers play an important role in education. Do you agree or disagree? State your opinion with specific reasons and examples.
It has long been believed that teachers hold the most crucial role in one's lifelong journey of education. In my experience, i completely agree with the stated opinion due to the fact that teachers play the role of an significant model while educate us.
To begin with, teachers are the second greatest model only after our parents. They are the people who have one the most contribution to our development in psychology. In fact, they have much impact on us than our parents as they can sympathize and listen to our issues, which parents sometimes cannot. Moreover, our instructors are also one of the best inspration. It is undeniable that teachers assist us with all they have in order that we can make a move in our path and consider a career for the future. As a result, they show us our merits and demerits and inspire our dream.
Subsequently, our teachers are also our second educator. It goes without saying that children will soon become the future leader in the future and teachers have the ability to shape these tomorrow's pioneer in the best way. Therefore, it is possible for students to receive a gigantic database of essential knowledge while having a deep insight. Not only will it improve the learners' knowledge but will also enhace their ability to carry them out into practice and greatly improve their academic settings.
All in all, that the principal role of edcation lies in the hands of educators is needless to say.
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- It is argued that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree Support your opinion with specific reasons anh examples 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the fact that teachers play the role of an significant model while educate us. T...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'learners'' or 'learner's'?
Suggestion: learners'; learner's
...p insight. Not only will it improve the learners knowledge but will also enhace their ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.776 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54607462577 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9990137932 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133160167793 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053219281736 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875087371134 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107975640176 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108401189947 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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