Education is an important aspect these days and vitally important. Education is imperative because in the modern era with evolving technology, education can produce an opportunity to live a prosperous life. Although some individuals often argue that free education for six consecutive years can provide a better future for children and eradicate poverty. However, others, including myself firmly disagree with the notion due to several reasons and I will discuss in the forthcoming passages.
Government providing free education to children can enhance their skills of reading, writing and using numbers. This free education scheme can be useful for betterment of their life and subsequently, deteriorating the rate of poverty. Moreover, educating pupils not only reduces the rate of poverty but can also generate young minds who can serve for their nation to make it a better place to live in. For instance, there are multitude of countries that provide free education for children until their upper secondary by giving scholar ships and encouraging to pursue higher studies. Therefore, providing education for children for free of cost can benefit their own lives and also benefiting the country's economy.
However, this perspective is comprehensible but six-year free education for children cannot be an effective way to tackle poverty and many other problems. It is irrefutable that, education can provide a better future for pupils, but it may not be helpful in the case of adults. Moreover, to face poverty in any country, there are some main aspects a country should take care of, like assigning more jobs especially for poor people for a comprehensive life and providing a proper shelter for them. To illustrate, the state Telangana had taken an initiative to provide double-bedroom houses for poor people, in order to reduce the rate of poverty.
In conclusion, although providing free studies for six years for children can reduce unemployment and poverty. However, focusing on other aspects too can be beneficial for country's economic growth in long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pursuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: pursuing
...by giving scholar ships and encouraging to pursue higher studies. Therefore, providing ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36503067485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85319773683 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555214723926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9435099681 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228526085706 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101708801388 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582335983624 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155038117288 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465318221724 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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