In many countries, most shops and products become identical. Some people think it is a positive development, while others believe it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, variety is one of the major aspects that a customer looks for while buying any product. However, nowadays all shops offer the same products, which seems advantageous to a few people but disadvantageous to others in terms of growth. In this essay, I shall be discussing both of the viewpoints as well as my own opinion.
To initiate, the same product policy gives rise to tremendous competition within the market. As a consequence, the owners will offer the genuine price of the product to the customers in order to sustain them. My uncle, for instance, who owns a mobile shop, keeps his profit to a minimum as there are 10 more identical shops around him. Furthermore, it will help to alleviate confusion while shopping, especially for women, who tend to take more time deciding which product to purchase. For example, my niece went to one shop to buy AC, knowing that the same AC would be available at the same cost, without any alternatives, in all the other shops.
On the flip side, the identical goods on the market may bring the economy curve down. Every retailer will sell items at a low margin, which will drastically affect the country's financial status. Not only this, but also customers will be bored of the same goods that are available everywhere in the country. Recent studies have shown that pupils prefer shopping abroad as different varieties of items entice them, which exemplifies my above point.
To sum up, there are umpteen merits of same things available across the country, such as lesser price and confusion; nevertheless, in my perspective, it is essential to have competition among retailers and a huge variety for customers, as it will boost our economy and make our country a fascinating place for shopaholics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93265993266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76251495025 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2628284866 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134018197563 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507844935344 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363651603816 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838574632492 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603637055575 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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