The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart illustrates information about the proportion of the residents in four Asian nation living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall, the percentages of population in 4 countries had a tendency to be upward. It is also worth pointing out that the residents who living in Malaysia is the highest figure at the end of the period.
To begin with, at the begining of the period, the percentages of people who living in Malaysia and Philippines shared a similar number about 30%. After that, the proportion of population lived in Malaysia increased significantly to over 80% at the end of the period while the percentage of residents lived in Philippines rose up to nearly 50% in 1990 although dropped slightly in 2010 before increasing minimally to over 50% in 2040.
Turning to the other set of data, both proportions of population lived in Thailand and Indonesia were recorded at about 15% in 1970. After that, this figure witnessed a dramatically increased to under 25% in 1990, respectively. Moreover, the percentage of people who living in Indonesia will be stood at peak of over 60% in 2040 while the proportion of residents lived in Thailand witnessed no changed from 2000 to 2020. After that, this figure will be measured increase significantly to about 45% at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...oportion of the residents in four Asian nation living in cities between 1970 and 2020,...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creasing minimally to over 50% in 2040. Turning to the other set of data, both p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86371938831 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504385964912 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2881967442 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233130051646 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106024768001 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109871469416 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176224797752 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126577959585 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.