government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
Education is the backbone of a nation . A nation or country can not proceed on the development of the lifestyle of its citizens . If the government tries to make the education for all the students cost free in university and colleges ,I think it will not be a good decision for the devlopment of the academic sector. Because It is very tough to the government to bear all the costs of the students . A numerous number of student admitted every year in the colleges and universities. They persue their degree and do better career for the next level of future . but the government has many costs within the educational aspects and it can manage some kind of scholarships and research funding for the students who have not enough money or capability to manage the educational costs
In the United states Of America, a huge number of students scholarships and research funding are available for the graduate level education but in the undergraduate level a mordant is available to help the students in to their pursuing the degree. Though ,many students are not capable of bearing the educational costs , they remain uneducated or involving in many professional courses which are very short term in time . It is very important for the government to take care of these matter and find a solution how the costs can be reduced for the scillinating and brilliant minds even if it is not possible to reduce the full cost of the academic career. Many organizations are very concern of this aspects and try their best to make a difference to the educational system. In the last decades , we can be able to get a huge statistical information on the basis of the non governmental organizations that about 30% student can have enough resources to bear the high cost of the college and university in the developing country . but in the the most developed country this rate is more higher and higher . As they get enough support from their government to maintain the cost of the whole educational ter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76967930029 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82513804241 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463556851312 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.974969191 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.846153846 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251782088874 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967505178275 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884242682888 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229294632366 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780566298019 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.