Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an inveitable truth that, environmental issues are increasing day by day like climate change is always international issue as authorities are not impose any daunting punishments against the offenders. I fully agree with this statement.
To commence with, decrease their relationship between foreign countries. To be precise, there are many things which use by people of international because of their saling. However, if government should impose any type of punishment, then they face many issues regarding to purchase and sale as well as it is also impact on boadings of international individuals as for government do not prefer to impose any punishments on offenders. For example, in India, most of the people like to use many various items and follow the same tradition of other countries.
Moving further, there are many factories in foreign, which are impact on climate change. To explain it, different factories of different problem as if factories reduce smoke and it is also affect on the climate because of smoke. Moreover, it is mixed with the year or when individual get oxygen and they can face many hazardous issues regards to their health, however, authories are not stop it because it is also impact on economy of the country as far as on their work. For instance, mostly people face multiple issues in their regular life like, asthma, heart disease and many more due to of climate change.
In conclusion, they can reduce their bondings with international human's as well as they cannot get different items from foreign culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10980392157 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79284525552 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525490196078 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3960785577 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177419091611 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626873984846 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744115386946 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116359137346 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086304781047 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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