A year ago, you lent your favourite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:
ask how he or she is doing
remind him/her about the book
explain why you need it back
Dear Tara,
I hope you are doing good. It has been almost a year since I have heard from you. Actually, today I am writing to ask for the book that you borrowed last year when you visited me.
I have been busy for the last six months because I went to Mumbai in January due to the new project that was assigned to me and I returned last week. Yesterday, I was searching for the book "The Monk who sold his car", but I could not find it. Suddenly I remembered that last year when you came to visit Bangalore during your vacations, I gave it to you as you were quite keen to read it.
I am hoping you would have finished it by now. Although I have already read that book, I am asking for it because I have an emotional attachment to it. You might reminisce when I told you why that book is important to me. My grandmother gave it to me as a present on my birthday. Unfortunately, this is the last memory of her that I have as an asset.
So, if you have completed it, please send it to me by courier. You don't need to worry about the charges, I will pay for it. I have attached my new address along with this letter. Also, give my greetings and love to your family.
Best Regards,
Maahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t, please send it to me by courier. You dont need to worry about the charges, I will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 32.9175257732 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16170212766 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34036363555 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1727322474 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.125 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256845536576 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871701445507 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068927588981 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173873139694 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418641043112 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.