Increasing fuel prices is thought by some to be the greatest way to address global environmental issues. However, while I believe that the rising fee of fuel is advantageous to protect the environment, I also see some drawbacks of this method.
With environmental preservation, the impact of increasing the expense of fuel is beneficial. First and foremost, it makes the number of private vehicles commuting on roads go down significantly, followed by a decline in gas emissions released into the environment because of people’s difficulty in accessing fuel. As a result, when the figure of poisonous substances in the atmosphere decreases, air quality would be enhanced and air deterioration would be alleviated. Another favorable reason is that companies and factories explored alternatives to fuel. For instance, Vinfast, one of the leaders of the automobile industry, focuses on electrical transportation.
On the other hand, the growth of prices of fuel brings out some disadvantages. One negative aspect is the inflation in economics. The rising fuel costs led to an increase of expenses in all items; then caused the devaluation of the currency due to the lack of citizens’ belief and the depression of banks and financial services. Furthermore, increasing the expense of fuel is possible to give rise to conflict between some countries. Almost all these warfare are derived from greed, and ambition to possess the redundant resources and earn an enormous profit from fuel of other nations.
To conclude, although there are a variety of excellent causes for the approval of rising fuel prices to tackle global environmental issues, this method also implicates many risks.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this warfare' or 'these warfares'?
Suggestion: this warfare; these warfares
...lict between some countries. Almost all these warfare are derived from greed, and ambition to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39245283019 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14998290637 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9319053476 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215827924901 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077768826678 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697795606173 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133796832581 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589936471455 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this warfare' or 'these warfares'?
Suggestion: this warfare; these warfares
...lict between some countries. Almost all these warfare are derived from greed, and ambition to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39245283019 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14998290637 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9319053476 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215827924901 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077768826678 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697795606173 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133796832581 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589936471455 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.