In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In numerous countries across the globe, a substantial migration trend from rural areas to urban centers has gained momentum. This phenomenon has prompted a significant decline in rural populations. In this essay, I will argue that this trend carries more negative consequences than benefits, impacting rural demographics and government management of resources in both urban and rural regions.
Firstly, the exodus of rural residents to urban areas has depleted the countryside of its workforce, resulting in the abandonment of agricultural lands and the erosion of unique cultural practices indigenous to these regions. As the agricultural sector suffers from a dearth of labor, it leads to decreased food production, which, in turn, impacts the nation's food security. Furthermore, the loss of traditional customs and practices can diminish the cultural diversity that enriches a nation's heritage.
Moreover, this rural-to-urban migration poses significant challenges for urban governance. For instance, during the COVID-19 pandemic, densely populated cities faced severe difficulties in controlling the spread of the virus. This highlights the importance of a balanced population distribution between rural and urban areas, ensuring that cities are not overburdened and that rural regions remain well-resourced and less susceptible to health crises. Access to basic necessities such as food and water is also more readily available in rural areas, fostering a sense of well-being and resilience.
In conclusion, while rural-to-urban migration may provide urban centers with a surplus of labor, it also engenders pressing issues for governments in terms of resource management and territorial planning in both rural and urban settings. To maintain a harmonious and sustainable society, policymakers must address these challenges by promoting balanced population distribution and investing in rural development. This approach will not only alleviate the strain on urban areas but also preserve the cultural and agricultural heritage of rural regions, ensuring a brighter future for all citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...production, which, in turn, impacts the nations food security. Furthermore, the loss of...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... the cultural diversity that enriches a nations heritage. Moreover, this rural-to-ur...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...susceptible to health crises. Access to basic necessities such as food and water is also more rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89836065574 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18136876662 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8219314366 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.384615385 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164164181442 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636815826992 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372002115062 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104310816355 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425612928106 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.