Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by private companies rather than governments. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is sometimes argued that private enterprises should have responsible for conducting and controlling scientific research instead of governments. Personally, I believe that this opinion is likely to bring more hamful impacts than beneficial ones.
On the one hand, there are several advantages when scientific research is conducted by private businesses. To commence with, private companies are often motivated to develop research outcomes that can be commercialized and generate revenue. This leads to the rapid development and dissemiantion of new products and technologies. For example, the invention of Iphone by Apple, a corporation in US, began the area of smartphones and facilitated modern forms of interaction between people all around the world. In addition, encouraging profit-driven companies to conduct scientific investigations can help them develop their own products and create competition in the market that ultimately benefits soceity.
However, the case for governments conducting scientific research is stronger. Initially, private companies are primarily profit-driven, which can lead to the neglect of research areas without immediate profitability, public health and environment for example. These scientific research may also require a great deal of spending that can be only afforded by governments. Moreover, being conducted and controlled by governments, scientific studies can be minimized the risk of being used for criminal purposes. For instance, studies related to nuclear power or weapons must be carried out by governmental organizations to protect a country from terrorism or other warfare.
In conclusion, while I accept that profit-driven companies carries out several significant innovations for soceity, I believe that governments can conduct better research as they are less susceptible to corporate influence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98120300752 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31002388609 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2063988248 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300500896986 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108160660017 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054025271573 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179714818838 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327622973781 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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