Nowadays, tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, there is no denying that the development and contribution of modern tourism play a significant portion of national economic growth to its country. This essay will demonstrate that the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks which it causes. I will suggest that not only tourism provides opportunities to have more carefull insight into other countrys’ culture, but local residents have better lives.
On the one hand, thank to touring it is possible for people in a nation to have a deeper insight into other countrys’ tradition. Tourism boosts the unity between people of all races, backgrounds and traditions. Citizen’s taste can be satisfied with different places of interset. Locality are helped to grab a chance to show itself off and even raise its profile in the world. Furthermore, the tourism contributes greatly to the improvements of local people’s life. It offers chance to promote the country’s image to the world in order that more enormous number of tourists will be attracted. Tourism accelebrates the income from cuisine, accomodation rented, souvenir bought. It also creates new jobs opening for local people. Due to this, there are chances to show off the increase in country’s economic growth and the life is better.
On the other hand, apart from the advantages tourism still leads to a few disadvantages and the typical one is that it spoils a country’s scenery. The unawareness of tourists is capable of causing terrible destructions such as deforestation, water pollution, soil pollution, …
In conclusion, nowadays, modern tourism has both good and bad impacts on a country economic growth. However, the small disadvantages can be countered by the great and effective benefits that tourism provides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
.... On the other hand, apart from the advantages tourism still leads to a few disadvanta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32028469751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96446621305 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0991007548 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219111504422 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674567099739 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672085219852 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127196461494 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562027866337 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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