In this day and age, there is no denying that the development and contribution of modern tourism play a significant portion of national economic growth to its country. While this development brings numerous benefits, it also poses certain drawbacks. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, tourism offers Employment opportunities in its country. The tourism industry often provides employment opportunities for local communities, ranging from hotel staff, tour guides, drivers, to artisans and craftsmen. This can help reduce unemployment rates and improve the standard of living for individuals and communities. Moreover, there are economic benefits. Tourism can generate significant revenue for a country through various channels such as accommodation, transportation, food, and entertainment. This can contribute to the growth of local businesses, job creation, and overall economic development.
On the other hand, the fast pace of tourism can have adverse effects on the environment. The vast number of tourists can pose threat to natural resources, ecosystems, and fragile environments. Overcrowding, pollution, and unsustainable practices can lead to degradation of natural habitats, loss of biodiversity, and increased carbon emissions.
In my opinion, the advantages of tourism, such as economic benefits and cultural exchange, can outweigh the disadvantages if managed sustainably. It is crucial to prioritize responsible tourism practices that minimize environmental impact, respect local cultures, and ensure that the economic benefits are distributed equitably among local communities. Governments, businesses, and tourists themselves should work together to promote sustainable tourism that preserves natural and cultural heritage while benefiting both visitors and locals.
To conclude, although tourism can have certain negative effects like destructive impact and growth of crime rate, it has an extremely positive influence on country’s economy and provides a large number of new jobs for the local people. I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03870967742 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25278396731 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3586249393 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.117647059 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190793098926 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631367887851 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659093777742 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111341594588 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101861186615 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.75 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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