In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Novelty of begineers and the expertise of seniors are both argued to be the most important factor essential for making contrbutions to any field. Many, just like the given prompt, argue that the pristine mind of begineers is the most essential factor for contributions. However, I believe that the seniors with expertise are more likely to make contributions as explained in the upcoming three paragraphs.
Some people believe that beginners of a field are free from any preconceptions and can thus provide fresh and unique prespectives due to which the begineers can make important contributions. For instance, when expert teachers with years of experience are unable to identify a way to get unruly children of today's modern age to concentrate in lectures, a younger teacher who hasnt learned traditional teaching methods but has recently experienced being a teacher herself might provide fresh insights. Thus, in certain situations, ibegineers are able to bring forth novel ideas.
However, this in not to say that experts are always far less likely to make any contribution at all. In fact, in most of the cases, experts are the ones who solve the major problems in any field. This is because the years and years of practical field experience of experts helps them better comprehend the field. Moreover, begineers also rely heavily on the guidance of the experts for tacking all sorts of issues. For instance, a fresh graduate of computer science may have theoritical knowledge of programming, but she might not be able to explain her work to the clients in a simple and understandable language. The expert on the other hand can smoothly explain the project to the client as she hamultipple years of experience.
Im additon, wheneve a novel conflict arrives that an individual cannot solve ny themselves, an expert is more likely to have a wider network of professionals in the field and thus is morelikely to gather diverse opinions on the field and consequently to contribute in the field.
Therefore, although sometiimes begineers can provide fresh prespective, I believe due to practical experience and wider network of professionals, experts are more likely to contribute to any field than beginers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: hasn't
...rate in lectures, a younger teacher who hasnt learned traditional teaching methods bu...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...she hamultipple years of experience. Im additon, wheneve a novel conflict arriv...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...begineers can provide fresh prespective, I believe due to practical experience an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18662952646 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96673989622 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515320334262 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3799409661 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229498340268 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823558060657 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464982111387 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128941502912 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213832841643 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...rate in lectures, a younger teacher who hasnt learned traditional teaching methods bu...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...she hamultipple years of experience. Im additon, wheneve a novel conflict arriv...
^^
Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...begineers can provide fresh prespective, I believe due to practical experience an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18662952646 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96673989622 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515320334262 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3799409661 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229498340268 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823558060657 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464982111387 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128941502912 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213832841643 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.