you are planning a two-week vacation and need someone to take care of your house while you are away.
write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
> Tell your neighbor that you are going away
> Ask your neighbor to take care of your house for you
> Explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do
Dear Mr. Wilson,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am going on a two-week holiday this weekend. However, there will be no one at home for those two weeks. So, Can I ask you a big favor by taking care of a few things while I am gone?
The tasks I would like you to do are amazingly simple. The first and most important thing is to keep an eye on the house and make sure no strangers enter it. Secondly, you can water my garden if it doesn’t rain. And the last one is to empty my mailbox and just throw the letters inside my house through the door.
I hope I am not asking for too much. Also, in the future whenever you need this type of help from me, I would love to help you. Moreover, I would be happy to offer you some money in exchange for your help. Please let me know if you will be able to help me out. Thank you very much.
Your neighbor
Tanveer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Wilson, I hope this letter finds you well. I am ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g care of a few things while I am gone? The tasks I would like you to do are ama...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tters inside my house through the door. I hope I am not asking for too much. Al...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Thank you very much. Your neighbor Tanveer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.99456521739 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93733801689 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4507327187 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.5 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354795807329 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117901818931 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880242388112 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181380989042 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487947171698 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.97 8.71597938144 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.57 7.59969072165 73% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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