The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
Human interventions have caused the extinction of several marine and land-based creatures. Personally, I think that industrialization and urbanization are major culprits for this worrying phenomenon. However, there are possible solutions to tackle this problem.
On the one hand, several human activities could threaten animal existence. Firstly, practices related to production processes like exploiting natural resources and manufacturing consumable products could release tons of detrimental gases and wastewater, which pollute the surrounding environment and force wild animals to leave their natural habitats. Moreover, the massive worldwide deforestation to make way for industrial areas has severely damaged the living of animals on land as it destroys their food sources and living spaces. Besides, the unprecedented urbanization in many developing countries like China has created tons of wastewater, which tends to be discharged into the oceans, and has killed millions of sea creatures, thus causing their disappearances.
On the other hand, several measures could be applied to alleviate negative impacts of human activities on wildlife. For instance, establishing national conservation areas has been proven to be effective in protecting wild animals in many nations as specific protection laws enforced in these places can prevent most human interventions with the Cuc Phuong National Park in Vietnam being a telling example. Another solution is introducing eco-friendly industrial practices such as using renewable energy sources and alternative materials for production. For example, the car industry in China has started focusing on electric cars after decades of producing cars running on gasoline, which have reduced the amount of waste created significantly.
In conclusion, although several practices conducted by humans have posed threats to the existence of land and sea species, there are plausible methods that governments and businesses could apply to prevent this problem.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 771, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...res, thus causing their disappearances. On the other hand, several measures coul...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96180555556 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12791337961 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8158387123 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.083333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166228816541 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660830895665 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536645272562 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103656295674 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184847720347 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 771, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...res, thus causing their disappearances. On the other hand, several measures coul...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96180555556 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12791337961 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8158387123 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.083333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166228816541 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660830895665 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536645272562 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103656295674 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184847720347 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.