In the modern era, advertisements have become integral part of human lives. Some people advocates that they are helping person and commerce, while others believe that there are some side effects of them. Therefore, ahead of my opinion both the views would be discussed.
Understanding the former opinion, through the commercials people can have knowledge regarding latest products. Moreover, they can compare similar products and can purchase the cheaper one. This is how they can save on their monthly budget. Furthermore, the companies can have information about the market scenario of their products so that they can either improve them or continue making their items as per requirements. For instance, when Iphone 14 phone’s launching advertisement came on television, everyone disliked it due to low grade features. Later on due to this reason, the company has stopped further manufacturing of the phone and saved huge investment loss. This is how commercials can have benefits on people and trades.
On the contrary, the latter view has its own reasons. To begin with, sometimes due to lucrative and tempting ads, individuals end up buying them even if they donot need it. This is especially common with electronic gadgets and machineries. Sometimes it becomes difficult for human nature to understand that companies are making fascinating commercial to increase their own sales. On the other hand, many a time it has been observed that the products are not as valuable as they are marketed. In a recent study, only in America, about 40% of population regret about their unnecessary expenses. That is why sometimes advertising can have detrimental effects.
To sum up and offer my position, I would state that every product has its own right to do marketing and we as a human being has to be cautious before buying any item. Otherwise, they are an essential part of our society. I would suggest that always quality of product should matter rather than how it is proposed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'regarding the latest'.
Suggestion: regarding the latest
...e commercials people can have knowledge regarding latest products. Moreover, they can compare si...
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Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phones'.
Suggestion: phones
...uirements. For instance, when Iphone 14 phone’s launching advertisement came on telev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12654320988 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78312756441 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3995655055 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.05 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160044618239 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462607433483 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536442601042 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109478755426 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809255058888 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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