“ “Government should place a few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development “
The world is an evolving sphere and we owe a large chunk of this development to a scientific research and development. The prompt talked about a need to place restrictions on scientific research and development but I disagree, the reasons for which will be expatiated below
Firstly, developments and advancement are a core of the world, it is why the world is currently not where it was some hundreds of years ago, a barrier or a restricted accessibility to scientific research and developments directly implies a halt, at worst, or a reduced pace, at best , to the currently developing society
Secondly, a groundbreaking research can be derived by literally anyone regardless of their experience or expertise In that field, beginners luck as they call it might lead to a cure or a solution which has been sought after for decades in futility
Cures for various drugs were manufactured due to intense and rigorous brain racking and hours spent in the laboratory, a reduced access or an ultimate reduction as the case may be will be at the detriment of the society as a whole as it will only serve to take us a step forward and 5 steps backwards
While acknowledging that the forms of research have been deployed for illicit uses which may range from production of weapons of mass destruction, creation of a deadly virus as a means of selling the cure and amassing wealth amongst others, it is worthy of note that an interrupted access to scientific research even poses a greater danger.
In conclusion, research and technological advancement should never be restricted at any cost as it is the key and the glue that holds the society’s growth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85460992908 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03741028335 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 23.0359550562 408% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 582.616130532 60.3974514979 965% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 456.333333333 118.986275619 384% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.0 23.4991977007 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.21951772744 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268816569204 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186895051272 0.0831039109588 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173006314211 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133849343519 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102893851131 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 14.1392134831 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.47 48.8420337079 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 12.1743820225 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.16 8.38706741573 145% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 11.2143820225 353% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.