The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that it is compulsory for parents to undertake courses in order to make sure that their offspring will develop well. Although I think that these types of classes are beneficial, I do not agree that they are the most effective method.
On the one hand, parenting courses could equip parents with the necessary knowledge and skills to upbringing their children at different developmental stages. Many first-time parents could be overwhelmed by the number of problems that they have to tackle every day when they raise their newborn infant. If parents did not have instructions from these kinds of classes, they would be confused and lead to serious consequences in the future. For example, having no expertise in teaching kids will increase the likelihood of committing a crime such as petty theft or drug trading when they go through adolescence. Furthermore, parenting courses will also help parents understand the psychology of their children and deal with puberty issues.
However, while parenting courses provide a lot of good skills and information, they are not suitable for parents who have financial struggles and limited time. People who belong to the underprivileged class have to work overtime or do various types of jobs just to make ends meet, hence, they do not have enough money and time for extra activities. In addition, many people believe that parenting is an innate skill that every father and mother can naturally access once they have a child. For instance, many mothers instinctively know how to hold and care for their offspring as soon as it is born. Many people have their own ideas about what good parenting involves due to their own upbringing, and cultural influences.
In conclusion, despite some advantages of parenting courses, I think that it should be up to parents to decide whether to participate in such courses or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1067961165 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73407818915 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576051779935 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7731717009 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242136848309 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100717629007 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699270551333 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166839345605 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210080946135 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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