A glance at the provided diagram illustrates the lifespan of salmon (a species of large fish) from eggs to become adult. In general, it is clearly apparent that there are three main of stages that taken at different aquatic habitats.
Looking in more detail from the chart, the cycle begins with the lying eggs on small stones in upper river (usually under reeds colony). This stages happens for approximately 5 to 6 months until the eggs hatch into fries with the size of 3 to 8 cm. Subsequently, the fries migrate to the lower river which has fast water debit for around 4 years. In that stages, the fries grow to be smolts which have 12 to 15 cm length. After that, the smolts swim into open sea and become adult salmon that 4 to 5 times longer in size. The adult phase takes time around 5 years before they swim back to the upper river for mating and lying their eggs on small stones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'mains'?
Suggestion: mains
...s clearly apparent that there are three main of stages that taken at different aquat...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reeds'' or 'reed's'?
Suggestion: reeds'; reed's
...all stones in upper river usually under reeds colony. This stages happens for approxi...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'happen'.
Suggestion: happen
...usually under reeds colony. This stages happens for approximately 5 to 6 months until t...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: longer
...d become adult salmon that 4 to 5 times longer in size. The adult phase takes time around 5 ye...
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g and lying their eggs on small stones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38181818182 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13471029942 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.2688259064 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.375 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0748290450737 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341497187833 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563644759032 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085002393596 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650919474892 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.