Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the effectiveness of advertising on our purchasing decisions. While some individuals argue that it is so prevalent that people no longer care about it, I personally believe that advertising programs significantly influence us.
There are several reasons why people argue that advertising becomes less effective when we encounter it frequently. When individuals are exposed to an advertisement too many times, they tend to associate it with annoyance. As a result, they may develop a dislike for the product and choose not to pay attention to it anymore. Furthermore, when there are plenty of advertisements, it becomes challenging to remember all of them, so it turns out that the primary aim of this activity is not achieved.
On the other hand, I believe that advertising has an extremely important impact on customer's behaviors. Advertisements are not only to introduce a product but also to provide promotional information. It brings huge discounts that make a lot of people decide to buy stuff that sometimes is not really necessary. Black Friday, for example, most companies have advertising and sales campaigns and it is clear that it is successful at persuading people to buy things. Alternatively, with the trend of globalization, we can buy anything around the world, so advertising plays a vital role in promoting the marketing process to sell products globally. In other words, this advertisement helps to expand the market and approach more potential customers.
In conclusion, although some advertisements would become less effective as they are so common, the majority of other advertising is crucial for encouraging people to buy things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remembering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: remembering
... advertisements, it becomes challenging to remember all of them, so it turns out that the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35714285714 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23933867549 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1117884226 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367238656643 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120545288518 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691534924594 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223673135229 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588383688321 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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