Recent years have witnessed a rising quantity of students having a propensity to study overseas for their further education. This essay seeks to elaborate on both the merits and demerits of this tendency as well as voice my own opinion.
There is no denying that when first studying in a foreign country, scholars may come up against a lot of obstacles. First and foremost, most students in general have a sense of homesickness as they have to live far from their families and have few opportunities to gather with their families, usually in summer vacation or some special occasions such as Tet Holiday celebration in their own countries. Therefore, they may feel isolated at first and not focused on their studying, causing bad performance. Another disadvantage of this development is the cultural shock. It is understandable that each culture has its own conception, thus, in some cases, students might be discriminated by their conduct, which seems to be inappropriate in other cultures. To exemplify, in some countries such as Germany or the USA, though one seems to arrive on time, it is considered late, hence he will have to be at least ten minutes earlier in order to be on time so that he will not be criticized for being disorganised.
Notwithstanding, I am of firm conviction that as students have to continue to study, they will soon have to accommodate themselves with these problems, therefore, the two aformentioned disadvantages are overshadowed by the long term perks including knowledge enrichment as well as higher income. To begin with, when exposing themselves to a new culture, they can broaden their horizons about its features, history and so on. Additionally, their language skills is also enhanced. This is strikingly exemplified by the fact that studying in English-speaking countries is the best way to improve their command of English. Aside from this, international incorporations are seeking versatile employees so they they can foster the acceleration of economic growth. Thus, speaking a global language fluently, particularly English, is an advantage in relation to others who are not good at English. As a result, they take priority over other opponents who apply for the same position and stand a chance of being promoted and getting higher salary than others.
Taking everything into consideration, although the downsides of studying overseas for higher education still exist, I am of the opinion that they are undoubtedly outweighed by the advantages for the students' future career in the long run.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...ions are seeking versatile employees so they they can foster the acceleration of economic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as for, at least, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18248175182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10223844244 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586374695864 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4964760932 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147890395015 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471892325375 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379835107601 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978534498057 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309515583352 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...ions are seeking versatile employees so they they can foster the acceleration of economic...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as for, at least, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18248175182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10223844244 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586374695864 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4964760932 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147890395015 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471892325375 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379835107601 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978534498057 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309515583352 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.