The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I strongly agree with the idea that there should be prompt measures to promote the use of other means of transportation than personal cars, as well as universal regulations regarding one's rights of owning or using said vehicle. This is mainly based on the following reasons.
Firstly, supposedly there would be more than 29 million vehicles on roads throughout Britian alone. Such overwhelming density is bound to cause traffic congestion, which can lead to other inconvenience such as people getting late to appointments, or, even worse, special vehicles like fire-trucks or ambulances getting delayed while in emergencies.
Secondly, not only is overflowing traffic a nuisance for human, it is also a threat to the environment, for the amount of carbon dioxide in the exhaust fumes released during heavy traffic is one of the main factors causing green-house effect, directly contributing to the severity of global warming.
Lastly, the suggestion of replacing cars with other forms of transportation is a practical solution to the problem. By sharing trips on buses, trains, taxis, etc, we can reduce the use of personal cars, moving faster thanks to lighter traffic all the while helping with preventing potential air pollution. In addition, strict laws and regulations in terms of owning or using cars are also a promisingly effective way to control vehicle density and maintain a smooth flow of traffic.
Overall, I cannot agree more with the suggestion on restraining the number of cars because by doing so not only would we have less busy roads and cleaner air, but we would also contribute considerably to protecting the environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...well as universal regulations regarding ones rights of owning or using said vehicle....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26893939394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93976245347 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3201508915 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160200681589 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687586195449 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629534790216 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772289222369 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439840965485 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...well as universal regulations regarding ones rights of owning or using said vehicle....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26893939394 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93976245347 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3201508915 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160200681589 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687586195449 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629534790216 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772289222369 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439840965485 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.