Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Advertisements control every mind’s person. There are two believe among people which advertisements affect our and make us change mind and other argument is since that they are increase nobody attention about them. In my opinion, ads play a crucial role for companies to selling their goods and products.
One the one side, ads are very effective when people across with them can take them think otherwise and provide that goods even he/she doesn’t need it. Not only can safe in time and money but they also familiar us with fake goods and avoid buying them by knowing ways of detecting them. For example, when you see an ad on TV which first introduce its goods and explain about fake goods that don’t have these standards understand buy which on.
On the other side, believe because of increase advertisements they loss their impact on our mind and cannot change our decision. People don’t attention ads which are in different places and when face with. Although there are lots of ads around the city, neighborhood and etc. they have an especial effect on out mind and set on unknown’s brain sector. Hence, advertisements have practical now and people would like to notice when see them.
Finally, it is not true to say by increasing ads people don't care about them when faced with them. I think advertise has a powerful dark side that most of people don't know about it. It is affect on your unknown brain that can control your decision.
In conclusion, companies use advertising to sell their goods. Because this they make ads to deliver an especial message to people and make a feel inside them that should provide that product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ts of ads around the city, neighborhood and etc. they have an especial effect on out min...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple would like to notice when see them. Finally, it is not true to say by increa...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot true to say by increasing ads people dont care about them when faced with them. I...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...advertise has a powerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect on you...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... powerful dark side that most of people dont know about it. It is affect on your unk...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ost of people dont know about it. It is affect on your unknown brain that can control you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82685512367 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41951696742 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0809397636 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172456182602 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656235757987 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439244980594 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112347597308 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390393375683 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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