The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives some information about the number of households in five distinct groups of annual income in the United States in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
In general, there were a fluctuation trend in all groups except one which stay without any change. In addition, the peak of the number of households related to 100000$ or more in 2015.
As can be seen, there was not any change in people who got income between 50000$ and 74999$ by 20 million in those three years. In all years the number of households who their annual income was 25000$-49999$ has more than less than 25000$ and dropped in 75000-99999$ about 10 million. The last group with 100000$ or more thoroughly has maximum number in all years except 2011 and in 2015 reached peak more than 33 million.
As a result, a upward trend has throughout of these three years in the number of annually income.
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except one which stay without any change
except one which stays without any change
the peak of the number of households related to 100000$ or more in 2015.
what is the verb for this sentence?
In all years the number of households who their annual income was 25000$-49999$ has more than less than 25000$
In all years the number of households whose annual income was 25000$-49999$ has more than less than 25000$
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