Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
The says in every subject you should visit its specialist. In recent years this has become a problem among people who have health problems who don’t visit a doctor. According to some, they try to cure themselves by their medicine alternatives. I think this is the wrong work to do because in many cases if you don’t know about the drug and consume it causes death.
Therefore, people shouldn’t use different drug and medicines aids when they are ill without allowing their usual doctor. First, before using them should ask either a nurse or their relative doctor because in most cases especially for people who have dangerous health problems it causes death and makes a disaster. Second, if does not lead to death it would have very irreparable effects that are with her/him for the rest of her/his life. Hence, the government should set rules to prevent this problem. Although people in society should know about drugs and be allowed to use them when they have insignificant sicknesses such as a cold which does not necessarily go to visit a doctor they don’t have this right to use them in dangerous health problems and dangerous situations.
On the other hand, if people try other alternative medicines the medical class is affected economically a lot. It is a negative aspect of society that their doctors become unemployed. Although it is essential that knowledgeable people should be educated about medicine to know about different medical and alternative ways they have to allowed by their usual or special doctors to consume and the duration of treatment. Not only does this keep the status of doctors in the society and people respect them but also, they can have their job as a good source of income. Thus, clients have to use the doctor's prescription.
In conclusion, I think it is very good to raise the knowledge of people and I strongly agree with it but if the government set useful rules for it that reduce the side effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8328358209 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5803652253 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486567164179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9298226356 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313994047875 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111203338856 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444153783062 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194153035497 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759641169839 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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