A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Because of the benefits of tourism many place’s income is based on it but tourism can make many troubles if we couldn’t control it. It is agreed that tourism has a significant effect on any country, so this essay will try to cover the pros and cons of tourism.
The higher number of tourists you have, the more economic growth you get. As tourism is considered to be a popular industry, it is also can increase the domestic market and decrease the rate of unemployment. when a tourist visit a country the local inhabitants ,shops ,hotels and transportation will benefit. For example, in the past, the UAI used to depend on power sources only to enhance their economy until the economic experts recognised the importance of tourism and the difference that could be made by it. So, they decided to appreciate this field and have made a lot of investments to attract tourists.
Although tourism can build a concrete relationships between countries, it also can make them foes. Some discrepancies can happen because of the variety of cultures. Respecting others culture and religious beliefs is an essential condition that we should take care of to avoid conflicts. Many quarrels could happen between locals and foreigners as result of ignoring each other’s customs and habits. For example, Some tourists have bad habits wherever they go they might mocking locals customs and traditions which can lead to a quarrel between them. So the government should make awareness campaigns to indigenous people and tourists.
To conclude, tourism has many positives either on the person or on the country. But there are some essentials can’t be ignored. In my opinion, if you want to raise your economy tourism us the best way you can choose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98281786942 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72598495329 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.723151332 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262182226646 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810652507245 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694835163088 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173184266645 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064824674815 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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