Claim: People who say they are bored should look inward rather than blaming the circumstances in which they find themselves.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
All of the people may get bored for some time. Some people claim that it is their own fault t which contribute to the boredom as they lack of imagination and self-motivation instead of blaming for the whole environment. In my opinion, I think it is one of the factor, but there are other reasons relating to the circumstance.
Why people get bored? As they have nothing to do as well as nothing to think about. When do people get bored? Usually in their spare time. As worker have to work harder during the weekdays and students have to study in order to get a good grades. In other words, if people all have something to pursue, they wouldn't get bored. So without a goal, he or she may fall into boredom. In that case, motivation is leading people to strive to the success.
Imagination is a another key factor which influence people. Think about when we are young, we have plenty of time, and we don't have to do anything to make a living or pursuing higher remarks. The only thing we do is playing. Without kids around us, one of the common way to play is to pretend different people in the family, and then we can make a role-play, playing with ourselves. So it is imagination that stimulate us to get rid of boredom.
However, if people have the motivation and imagination, they will be also feel bored because the society will also play an important role in influencing a majority of people. For example, in the society which most of the money is concentrated in a few people, no matter how harder poor people work, they wouldn't get the chance to make enough money to make a living. In that case, they would lose the hope for life, and are reluctant to continue working. The whole society are pervaded with hopeless thought, everyone except for the richest person would refuse to work and then get bored.
In conclusion, there are many factors that may have contribution to the boredom. Lack of imagination and self-motivation is a possible aspects, but the environment is also a decisive factor.（360）
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
All of the people may get bored for some time. Som...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ople all have something to pursue, they wouldnt get bored. So without a goal, he or she...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...trive to the success. Imagination is a another key factor which influence peop...
^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e young, we have plenty of time, and we dont have to do anything to make a living or...
^^^^
Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...atter how harder poor people work, they wouldnt get the chance to make enough money to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
...ation and self-motivation is a possible aspects, but the environment is also a decisive...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, except for, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67808752243 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4992635574 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6818181818 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195088239544 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619079881949 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657810520574 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122470760841 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634171710745 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
All of the people may get bored for some time. Som...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ople all have something to pursue, they wouldnt get bored. So without a goal, he or she...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...trive to the success. Imagination is a another key factor which influence peop...
^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e young, we have plenty of time, and we dont have to do anything to make a living or...
^^^^
Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...atter how harder poor people work, they wouldnt get the chance to make enough money to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
...ation and self-motivation is a possible aspects, but the environment is also a decisive...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, except for, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67808752243 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4992635574 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6818181818 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195088239544 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619079881949 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657810520574 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122470760841 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634171710745 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.