People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
While in the past, people used to get many hours of the night’s rest. However, it affects individuals and society. This essay will illustrate the reasons for this trend and explain the impact it has on both people and who around them.
On the one hand, it is true that people work hard for money to live self-sufficiency. Nowadays, overworking and busy life cause anxiety in sleeping. People most of the time work on developing themselves in order to have a good stable life. They work night shifts and overtime hours and this lifestyle can make a wide range of troubles for many humans. Another factor is traffic. While many cities suffer from crowded roads especially in the morning, people used to wake up and leave their houses before dawn in order to reach their work early.
On the other hand, the people around them may be affected and it causes mental health problems. The human body needs at least seven to nine hours to sleep. The tiredness of citizens causes a stressful atmosphere, which had a negative influence on individuals. Short sleeping hours induce aggression. Moreover, people wake up tired then they start to shout to each other. This effects their daily interactions which make their life challenging and hard to find time for their families.
To conclude, many people are not getting enough time to sleep because they need to make a good living and earning money. As a result, not only their health will be effected but also their relationships and interactions with people towards them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, at least, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89575289575 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51164162337 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9266160988 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5882352941 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24317768313 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743412643333 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565292791528 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170228898074 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637762657336 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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