Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed ( damaged ) by human activity . Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live . What is your opinion ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .
The quality of human life has improved greatly over the past few centuries , but Earth is being harmed more and more by human activities . As we develop our technology , we demand more from our planet . Eventually, this will harm people as well . But as far as I am concerned that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live and also makes some negative effects in this process . My arguments for this point are listed as follows .
Our planet gives us everything we need , but natural resources are not endless . Strip mining devastated whole regions , leaving bare and useless ground . Deforestation removes old growth trees that can't be replaced .Too much fishing may harm fish populations to the point where they ? There are more people than ever , living longer than ever . So is it any surprise that many areas suffer from too much development ? Anyone living in or near a city has experienced " urban sprawl ". There is a new shopping area on every corner and new houses , townhouses and apartments everywhere . Traffic gets worse and worse because planners can't keep up with growth . Keeping up with human demand is hard enough . Environmental concerns come in last .
With growth comes pollutions . Companies and communities dump waste into water . Landfills are full of trash . Emissions from factories pollute the air . Barrels of industrial waste and worse , radioactive waste , have no safe place to go . If we're not careful, we can harm our planet beyond repair .
People need to respect the Earth and try to preserve it . If we don't , what kind of future will we have ? Think twice before polluting the Earth .
- The spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalisation produce positive effects for everyone . Do you agree or disagree ? 61
- In some countries students are required to learn a foreign language but in other countries it is not necessary to do so Discuss the benefits of each case and give your own opinion 80
- Some people believe that university students should be rquired to attend classes . Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students . Which point of view do you agree with ? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer . 61
- It is better for children if the whole families e g aunts uncles and grandparents are involved in the children s upbringing rather than their fathers and mothers only Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 77
- In Britain , when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people wheres there are nurses to look after them . Sometimes the government has to pay for this care . Who should be responsible for our old people ? 73
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228758169935 0.247107548796 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.173202614379 0.15552993741 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114379084967 0.0946569551029 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.062091503268 0.0501201869031 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0522875816993 0.0437536398559 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101307189542 0.122223957237 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0359477124183 0.0403219363162 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56250633402 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016339869281 0.0326786765898 50% => OK
Particles: 0.00653594771242 0.00163938923432 399% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0861751148067 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130718954248 0.0214082191602 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00980392156863 0.0119246538136 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1666.0 1933.38276553 86% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.052104208 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46229508197 6.10592293882 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20519365927 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276315789474 0.37474360046 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.180921052632 0.284197041944 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118421052632 0.203843217982 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0855263157895 0.137313986986 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56250633402 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.560935902166 106% => OK
Word variations: 65.8498906614 60.7401812628 108% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0911823647 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.6666666667 20.7725350517 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8842306896 49.5273876611 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.902439024 93.4120437189 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.243902439 15.2821509519 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.512195121951 0.594174754866 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01102204409 818% => Too many language errors. Double check essay format, grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 30.7587719298 49.1922392462 63% => OK
Elegance: 1.27272727273 1.69127372897 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.294727331312 0.332604825255 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0317624379517 0.102734651613 31% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0538727876795 0.0668474354756 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.341331807043 0.534917948617 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121499497975 0.148666948902 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660715271461 0.13441755203 49% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891661746678 0.0742828286743 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.158401329922 0.324241079732 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0103556012441 0.0640056729886 16% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176179509133 0.22793763319 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833822787987 0.0582452615562 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41883767535 205% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.88977955912 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 2.60220440882 500% => Too many negative topic words.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.00200400802 350% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 10.493987976 219% => OK
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Rates: 70.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9