The line graph illustrates the average temperatures per month while the table shows the average number of hours of sunshine throughout a course of a year in three cities which are London, New York and Sydney.
Based on the line graph, Sydney had the highest temperature at the beginning of the year which was above 25°C. On the other hand, New York experienced the lowest temperature which was below 5°C as compared to London which experienced a slightly higher temperature which was below 10°C. In the month of February, the temperatures of London and New York continued to rise whereas the temperatures of Sydney showed a falling trend until July. In the month of July, New York experienced a hiking temperature and hit the peak at below 30°C while the temperature of London rose to 23°C. In the same month, Sydney had its temperature decreased to above 15°C. July was a month of turning point for the three cities as there were reverse trends. After New York hit the peak point of below 30°C, its temperature fell dramatically to touch 5°C point. London experienced the same trend in which its temperature fell significantly to below 10°C after its temperature remained constant at 23°C in the months of July and August. In contrast, Sydney experienced an increase trend for its temperature in which the temperature increased from above 15°C to touch the point of 25°C in December.
Based on the table, New York had the highest total annual hours of sunshine which was 2535 while Sydney and London ranked second and third respectively. Although New York had the highest number of hours of sunshine, it was the lowest temperature city compared to other cities over the course of the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line graph illustrates the average t...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the temperature of London rose to 23°C. In the same month, Sydney had its temperat...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'third', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289389067524 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.128617363344 0.116061578633 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.064308681672 0.0759168565197 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.016077170418 0.0366838410393 44% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0192926045016 0.0131127313244 147% => OK
Prepositions: 0.170418006431 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0225080385852 0.0379272487307 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6706347715 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0257234726688 0.0210936926555 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11575562701 0.0948980150116 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0257234726688 0.00967000014798 266% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1719.0 1161.00487805 148% => OK
No of words: 289.0 196.9 147% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94809688581 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.73763899035 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311418685121 0.337110787985 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190311418685 0.247514529752 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145328719723 0.171178102325 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114186851211 0.112407865282 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6706347715 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40830449827 0.546246751206 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.6095139883 49.3433353143 78% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0833333333 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.098489858 42.9750493124 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 135.714022679 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 23.0094962315 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.689975730869 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 43.1144752018 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.94117647059 2.94281807926 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515247039714 0.418131533498 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.225742428383 0.181151798455 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103229560873 0.0850326197045 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.659743175667 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162957414072 0.157042692854 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286630272665 0.228904883108 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124409297615 0.108899403657 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.509344974962 0.367819155151 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0324284354247 0.0812612215331 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.475062756229 0.316326947829 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636826548596 0.0921553760075 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9