"One who has no music in his life is a murderer." Music is very necessary in the life of any human being. Nowadays there are many sort of musics across this whole globe. In present days international music is heard everywhere which replace the traditional music of any nation. I personally believe that traditional music of any country is very precious and should be preserved. I have many reasons for my stand.
Firstly,music is a best partner of any human in his loneliness. Life of human being is becoming more and more stressful in this era of fast advancement and technology. Music gives a kind of pleasure and relaxation to the mind of any person. It acts as a tonic of all the worries of any individual. Moreover, music is the best source of the entertainment in the leisure time of any individual's life.
On the other hand, in many societies traditional music is replaced by the international music. Traditional music of any nation has its own importance and significance and it is very useful for the society. For instance, it gives us information about our culture and heritage through the folk lores and folk songs. So that's why it should be preserved for upcoming generations. But nowadays international music becomes more and more famous such as pop music and jazz music,which becomes a threat for the diminishing of the traditional music in any country.
At last,conclusion of the above discussion is that life of any human being without music is a big mistake. Traditional music of any country is very valuable and useful for the society in spite of international music . So there is a need to preserve the traditional music of any country.
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- There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society? 73
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- These days people get more information of the whole world with the help of media. What are the advantages and disadvantages of media. 73
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'sort of', 'such as', 'in spite of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251533742331 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.10736196319 0.155533422707 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125766871166 0.0946595960268 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0337423312883 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0368098159509 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150306748466 0.122226691241 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0245398773006 0.0403226058552 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.13179185156 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00613496932515 0.0326793684256 19% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.116564417178 0.0861772015684 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00613496932515 0.021408717616 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0122699386503 0.011925033212 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1689.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90559440559 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297202797203 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244755244755 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185314685315 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136363636364 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13179185156 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.037074148 79% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486013986014 0.56093040696 87% => OK
Word variations: 47.108843283 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8888888889 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4995590798 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.3644133644 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 2.39655172414 1.69124875643 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.637680208628 0.332605444948 192% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113818931144 0.102741220458 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829449129804 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561693678594 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170984624153 0.148594505496 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.276965970101 0.134430193775 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130382101439 0.0742795772207 176% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.475766198088 0.324371583561 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0412217446177 0.0638462369009 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.49112273871 0.228012699653 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555261093359 0.058150111329 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9