Time spins and with every spin of time there is a change, Changes bring out doubts, conflicts and controversies. Media plays an important role to deliver information to the people. This media has immense merits and demarits.
On the positive side media has remaarkable impact on the society. It has various advantages. It deliver information to the whole world by many ways like through newspapers, magazines, and internet. First of all printing media newspapers and magzines contain a lot of news related to government , day to day incidents , international news. These are available at cheap rates and every normal person can afford these. Furthermore televisions deliEver information with audio-visual effects. This type of media aware us about good policies, products with the help of advertisements. Today, crime is arising at an alarming rate. Online media aware people to keep away from crime and criminals. For example TV programs like Savdhan India, crime petrol are telecasting to help people know about the criminal activities. So, media helps people in many ways.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantges of media which can not be underestimated. Media spread very rumours about the goverment and politicians. In addition, media shows a news by extending it. Many youngsters believe blindly on news shown in television. It leaves a bad impact on them and they go toward wrong direction.
In the gist, it can be concluded that everything has its own significance. Nothing should be underestimated an overvalued. So, media has both advantages as well as some disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r information to the people. This media has immense merits and demarits. On the ...
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...society. It has various advantages. It deliver information to the whole world by many ...
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...nd internet. First of all printing media newspapers and magzines contain a lot of...
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...d every normal person can afford these. Furthermore televisions deliEver information with...
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...d. So, media has both advantages as well as some disadvantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.309278350515 0.247107183377 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.137457044674 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790378006873 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0274914089347 0.0501214627716 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0309278350515 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113402061856 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0378006872852 0.0403226058552 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04498016288 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240549828179 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00687285223368 0.00163938923432 419% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0893470790378 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137457044674 0.021408717616 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00343642611684 0.011925033212 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1613.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 316.048096192 81% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27626459144 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338521400778 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268482490272 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198443579767 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15953307393 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04498016288 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63813229572 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 71.2861489724 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.6818181818 20.7743622355 56% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1462018341 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3181818182 127.492653851 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6818181818 20.7743622355 56% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.99599198397 375% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.5300672091 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 2.35087719298 1.69124875643 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451216713444 0.332605444948 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0638685826895 0.102741220458 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.048856795678 0.0668466124924 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.376775794684 0.534860350844 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122558490515 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118209741967 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868995899792 0.0742795772207 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266230122792 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0748063483552 0.0638462369009 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258839503327 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116027443593 0.058150111329 200% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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