You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner. In your letter
• Describe what you need
• Ask whether they have these items
• What they cost
Dear Mr. /Madam.,
I have heard about your shop from my friend which sells second-hand furniture and he has told me that the furniture you are selling is cheap, has a guarantee for at least 3 months, and a one-day test.
As the flat I have recently rented is unfurnished, I need almost all kinds of equipment to furnish it. At first, I need a bed for my bedroom, a sofa and a 40” LED TV for my living room, and two carpets; one for my bedroom and the other one for my living room. The kitchen is equipped with main facilities; so, I do not have any intention to spend my money on it. I prefer to wait for two months to buy the rest of my needs. However, these stuff that I have mentioned above must be clean and be without any damages or scratches. Please send me word if you have these facilities or not and if you have, please send me the invoice and let me know the amount of money I have to pay.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
...ed a bed for my bedroom, a sofa and a 40” LED TV for my living room, and two carp...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you. Your faithfully,
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'as to', 'at least']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.190476190476 0.220444632235 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.190476190476 0.167888034529 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0428571428571 0.0606518309736 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380952380952 0.0506257000042 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.133333333333 0.118615021944 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109523809524 0.107062808482 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.041066498444 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33167488864 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0385302599488 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0809523809524 0.0714148451538 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0047619047619 0.0191574576366 25% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0047619047619 0.00930345855455 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 961.0 1141.60824742 84% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.134020619 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11170212766 5.53046319177 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.223404255319 0.284621296913 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.154255319149 0.211203875043 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0957446808511 0.133321485273 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.063829787234 0.0843313296314 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33167488864 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.4429845186 62.8969750728 90% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8 16.4300151701 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9674107899 44.7399317507 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 90.9928171075 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.4300151701 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.613754768223 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 7.22680412371 42% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Readability: 34.2255319149 37.5504026743 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.921052631579 1.13073093955 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340146603658 0.331212695627 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0601539631867 0.0927372745006 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.051093878066 0.0736520305886 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579541025131 0.662452444078 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.253583753511 0.233577193048 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125166894489 0.122183219658 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947733244406 0.0765303033291 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.173823324575 0.110270004696 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.08584562965 0.120535355502 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234541515118 0.120397337282 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917418830387 0.113578534861 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.54639175258 44% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.62886597938 190% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.25773195876 85% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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