People succeed because of their hard work,but some say it is something else that is significant for success. How far do you agree with this statement? Give some reasons from your personal knowledge or experience to support your stance?
In this age of cut throat competition, success is key to experience luxurious life style. Whether hard work opens the gate of success or not has sparked a heated debate. In this essay, I would like to incline by the statement that hard work wins the success.
multifarious points stand up to shore my point of view. First and foremost, It is said that "luck is lift and hark work is stair", to be specific, hard work guarantee you the success where as luck does not come with definite guarantee. For example, Anil ambani , the very famous business man of india had nothing when he started his business. He relied on hard work and hard work made it possible for him to be counted among the richest personalities of the universe.
Further emphasising on my point of view, all the example of famous personalities of world earned their success with hard work. They never trusted anything else except working hard, so there are hard proves available to find out how hard work take you to the heights of success. Adding to it, when you work hard for any particular goal, only then you can maximize your joy of reaching that goal, success in gift has no excitement
By contrary, Others has conflicting views. According to them, hard work is just another meaning of wasting time, Where as other factor like as luck and being known of famous personalities plays paramount role to take you to success. For example, Wasim jaffer ,A very skill full domestic player and known as artists of wrist work , worked hard but could not make to Indian national team. Where as, Ravi gavaskar, The son of former indian cricket captain, made his way to national team like a cake walk just because of being a son of famous cricketer
To recapitulate, Even though luck contribute in success somewhat, but there is no synonymous of hard work to get to definite success
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Comments
Try to put essay in a correct
Try to put essay in a correct essay format.
Your language/organization/structure/ideas are good enough and it can reach 7.0 or over with a correct essay format.
and what is the correct
and what is the correct format sir
would you please make it clear for me
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259052924791 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147632311978 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111420612813 0.0946595960268 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445682451253 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0557103064067 0.0437548338989 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122562674095 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.041782729805 0.0403226058552 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4629833486 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0445682451253 0.0326793684256 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00557103064067 0.00163938923432 340% => OK
Determiners: 0.058495821727 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.008356545961 0.021408717616 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016713091922 0.011925033212 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1848.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 327.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65137614679 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293577981651 0.374742101984 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214067278287 0.28420135186 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131498470948 0.203846283523 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.085626911315 0.137316102897 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4629833486 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.0020743703 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 27.25 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4517985148 49.517814964 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7743622355 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.6567278287 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.70786516854 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306234596232 0.332605444948 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106614101423 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0564552806673 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575002391429 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194037263828 0.148594505496 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138316141109 0.134430193775 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406474049877 0.0742795772207 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324652480983 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0413347843372 0.0638462369009 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201577969947 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360918755015 0.058150111329 62% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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