Health is wealth and no amount of money can get back a life once lost. With the development of Technology and Globalization, life has become easier and physical activity is at the least. The food we consume and the air we breathe is contaminated, leading to a variety of health problems. The government has allocated a part of its health budget on the prevention of diseases whereas some portion goes for research purposes to find cures. It is true that prevention is always better than cure but I do not agree with diverting the funds from treatment to prevention.
Cigarette smoking is injurious to health and leads to cancer. This information is available to the public from children to adults. The government ensures that preventive measures be taken in the form of printing damaged body images on the covers to screening the causes and effects to the smokers and their families. However, people still continue to smoke irrespective of the consequences. Hence, prevention is not always effective and a cure needs to be found at the earliest.
Moreover, there are chances of non smokers being victims of lung cancer. In this scenario, only a cure would help the person. I know of a friend, who never touched a single cigarette in his entire life. However, he was diagnosed with lung cancer. The reason being smokers in his neighborhood and colleagues which led to unintentional passive smoking. Within the same span of time, cures for Tuberculosis, Asthma and polio have been found thus saving huge number of lives.
A country's public are the strength of that country and if the people are suffering from deadly disease there is not a slightest hope of growth. Scientists and researchers put untiring efforts to ensure that cures can be found to diseases and this can only be accomplished with the help of government funds. Funds should be allocated for advanced technology and research centers to find cures for diseases like cancer, aids,
In conclusion, I would like to say that even though prevention can save time, effort, money and health of the people, finding cures for diseases should be a priority as there as diseases which can be inherited from parents or unpreventable.
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development? 95
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and ma 78
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research Discu 83
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...fering from deadly disease there is not a slightest hope of growth. Scientists an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd cures for diseases like cancer, aids, In conclusion, I would like to say that ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'whereas', 'in conclusion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284653465347 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.173267326733 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0544554455446 0.0946595960268 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0420792079208 0.0501214627716 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272277227723 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118811881188 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0594059405941 0.0403226058552 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77582719537 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039603960396 0.0326793684256 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00247524752475 0.00163938923432 151% => OK
Determiners: 0.0940594059406 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222772277228 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00742574257426 0.011925033212 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2195.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 369.0 316.048096192 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94850948509 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371273712737 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271002710027 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181571815718 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121951219512 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77582719537 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 59.0279385837 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4210526316 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8878008607 49.517814964 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.526315789 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.814263465372 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.5213236343 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.90816326531 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311727084108 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873952579713 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.078927707988 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523104589499 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160584825899 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115345149347 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648847196236 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357996388702 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0925271861069 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196529750175 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705451861903 0.058150111329 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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