IELTS ESSAY - Nowadays people are forgetting national celebrations and enjoying themselves on other days that are important to them personally. Discuss and give your opinion.
In this modern life, people are giving more preference to other day celebrations than the national celebrations. As they are enjoying other days as it give more happiness and socialism. There are various reasons people are disdain their national celebration. In this essay I will explain more detail about the various causes behind it.
Undeniably, other day celebrations like Valentine’s day, Friendship day, Holy, Deepavali, Christmas etc., are celebrated imperative all over the world. The essence is they are sharing love, affection and gifts. Due to financial crisis, government education po...
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Sentence: As they are
Sentence: As they are enjoying other days as it give more happiness and socialism.
Description: The fragment it give more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: The essence is they are sharing love, affection and gifts.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and they
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