Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter:
a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country.
b. Describe the public event
c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.
Hi Uloma,
How are you? I hope this letter meets you well. Our new yam festival is coming up on the 25th September and I'm inviting you to the ceremony. This is an opportunity to experience my culture like you have always wanted.
The new yam festival is an annual event that marks the beginning of the harvesting period in my country. On the first day of the celebration, every family harvests the biggest yam tuber in their farm. This yam is cooked by the mother of the house. The head of the family then prays over it, blesses every member of his family and the food is shared to everybody, including their visitors. Over the next three days, different music groups parade on the streets, singing and dancing. It is such a glamorous event.
I am also planning other activities for you during this period. Before the end of the event, we shall go to the lake where we will take a boat ride. You will also see other visitors from different countries. Oguta lake is one of the most popular places for tourists who come to Nigeria and do not be surprised if we meet people from your country there. Also I will take you to the Oka museum that you have always talked about. I bet you, you will relish every moment in my town.
I really hope you will be able to make it. See you soon.
All the best,
Chinedu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...we meet people from your country there. Also I will take you to the Oka museum that ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212996389892 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.15523465704 0.167888034529 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0649819494585 0.0606518309736 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043321299639 0.0506257000042 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115523465704 0.118615021944 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0938628158845 0.107062808482 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0361010830325 0.041066498444 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.22405912326 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252707581227 0.0385302599488 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00361010830325 0.00132118243153 273% => OK
Determiners: 0.115523465704 0.0714148451538 162% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0216606498195 0.0191574576366 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108303249097 0.00930345855455 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1320.0 1141.60824742 116% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.134020619 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38775510204 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.273469387755 0.284621296913 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.151020408163 0.211203875043 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114285714286 0.133321485273 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.065306122449 0.0843313296314 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22405912326 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608163265306 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 63.5658099365 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 12.9587628866 147% => OK
Sentence length: 12.8947368421 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9607113409 44.7399317507 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4736842105 90.9928171075 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8947368421 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.613754768223 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 27.9967776584 37.5504026743 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.09195402299 1.13073093955 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240780915691 0.331212695627 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954110906363 0.0927372745006 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0846419249941 0.0736520305886 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520501856787 0.579516596996 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157477213246 0.180689518051 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797390660457 0.122183219658 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397858239877 0.0765303033291 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268865657479 0.211926503985 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.014734740794 0.0737400523855 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148772737621 0.203819188451 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059943809184 0.067151250289 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.0206185567 249% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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