To create a replica of human-being has remained a fascinated subject in the latest scientific and technological era. After the successful effectuate of animal cloning, many scientists are experimenting to avail success in cloning human-being. Many adepts warn not to pragmatic on this idea for the betterment of humanity. My thought also goes with the plea and, that can be supported with following arguments.
To commence with, the survey says that the life expectancy of many countries has crossed eighties and centuries. If cloning of human-being would support to live people more longer , then, there would be reduction in death rate of countries which can lead to increase population of aged people exponentially. The increase in population and that too of aged people can affect the economy of those countries in many aspects like employment of youngsters, medication, retirement funds and so on.
Moreover, It is difficult to capricious that the the invention would be utilized on to serve the mankind. There are many awful mind exists in the world who can take advantage of cloning in order to get power or to rule the world. The best examples can be understandable from some bollywood and hollywood movies like Robot, Krish2 , and Resident Evil respectively.
On the contrary, there are few ambivalent associated with the idea of cloning of human being, that is people can clone their beloved ancestors. Also , cloning can be used to give ling life to exceptional personalities of the world like Tom cruise, Amitabh Bachchan and so on. It can help to cure several disease like diabetes that are affecting our young generations.
To sum up the all above arguments, though cloning has array of benefits in favour of human being, it can provoke chaos in the world with nasty use. Again , the ephemeral cloning, just to avail organ sounds very inhuman. So, Under the light of all above arguments, I strongly believe we should not disturb the process of almighty and thus to restrict ourself to animal cloning only.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: After the successful effectuate of animal cloning, many scientists are experimenting to avail success in cloning human-being.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to successful and effectuate
Many adepts warn not to pragmatic on this idea
Many adepts warn not to make it pragmatic on this idea
My thought also goes with the plea
My thought also go with the plea
to live people more longer
to live people much longer
there would be reduction in death rate
there would be a reduction in death rate
can lead to increase population of aged people
can lead to increase the population of aged people
There are many awful mind exists in the world
There are many awful minds existing in the world //if not, there are two verbs
Sentence: Moreover, It is difficult to capricious that the the invention would be utilized on to serve the mankind.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to the and the
Sentence: On the contrary, there are few ambivalent associated with the idea of cloning of human being, that is people can clone their beloved ancestors.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and people
To sum up the all above arguments
To sum up the above arguments
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 334 350
No. of Characters: 1642 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.275 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.916 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.737 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.999 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.58 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a replica of human-being has remained a fascinated subject in the latest scienti...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'longer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: longer
...uman-being would support to live people more longer , then, there would be reduction in dea...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...would support to live people more longer , then, there would be reduction in death...
^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here would be reduction in death rate of countries which can lead to increase pop...
^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ver, It is difficult to capricious that the the invention would be utilized on to serve...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ver, It is difficult to capricious that the the invention would be utilized on to serve...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and hollywood movies like Robot, Krish2 , and Resident Evil respectively. On t...
^^
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with the idea of cloning of human being, that is people can clone their beloved a...
^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... can clone their beloved ancestors. Also , cloning can be used to give ling life t...
^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: LING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
...ors. Also , cloning can be used to give ling life to exceptional personalities of th...
^^^^
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... world like Tom cruise, Amitabh Bachchan and so on. It can help to cure several d...
^^
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'arrayed'.
Suggestion: arrayed
...all above arguments, though cloning has array of benefits in favour of human being, i...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...chaos in the world with nasty use. Again , the ephemeral cloning, just to avail or...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'on the contrary', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240540540541 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.156756756757 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0810810810811 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0486486486486 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0243243243243 0.0437548338989 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140540540541 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0459459459459 0.0403226058552 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83342996009 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0459459459459 0.0326793684256 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0027027027027 0.00163938923432 165% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783783783784 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0351351351351 0.021408717616 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0135135135135 0.011925033212 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2034.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01775147929 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340236686391 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272189349112 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198224852071 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144970414201 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83342996009 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.3782652864 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.125 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4160550289 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.125 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.3439349112 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.85882352941 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341858849693 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0953202128331 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0663517444117 0.0668466124924 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.585939115331 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109006090074 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14625326552 0.134430193775 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495002819543 0.0742795772207 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390094243547 0.324371583561 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0308795602974 0.0638462369009 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232214724479 0.228012699653 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132206480546 0.058150111329 23% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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