It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It has always been a controversy among people over whether building a shopping center in the neighborhood is a good idea or not. However, in my opinion, it has both advantages and disadvantages. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point of view.
In the first place, when a shopping mall is going to be built in my community, it will increase the value of my home and it is expected that more people will be attracted to the area. Shopping centers consist of different stores, such as food course, restaurants, bars, electronic shops, movie theaters, etc. Therefore, it would be a very nice place to hangout and pass some time. We do not need to drive for miles or use public transportation in order to purchase the products we need. We can get almost everything we want within a short time. In addition, different stores can provide us with various products and we can compare the prices and then make a decision.
There are some disadvantages about building a shopping center, too. Traffic jam is always one of the concerns of building something new. The center will attract many people from different parts of the city and the parking cars would cause some problems. The streets are narrow, with parking on both sides. When the center does not provide enough parking spaces, people will park their cars near our houses which can be problematic. Another downside of this announcement is that the neighborhood would be very noisy and crowded since the shopping centers are usually open all day long. However, they may think about possible solutions in order to solve this issue.
In conclusion, based on the reasons listed above, building a shopping center is a good idea as the advantages overweigh the drawbacks. It can be a source of entertainment and we can purchase whatever we want without spending so much time driving to another place. Therefore, I strongly support this plan.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244505494505 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.159340659341 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0576923076923 0.0866891130778 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521978021978 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0631868131868 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101648351648 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0351676179071 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69763781898 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192307692308 0.0309702414327 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107142857143 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0412087912088 0.0209618222197 197% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1915.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 326.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87423312883 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343558282209 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263803680982 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174846625767 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0950920245399 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69763781898 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 60.8446978151 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1578947368 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2524056419 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.789473684 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.538262835 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216834478889 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0861825952142 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0725245618777 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.430312669711 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130870276748 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775656527385 0.114077575197 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565940618021 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283224937341 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0270167182105 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15420013963 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032446347492 0.0618886996521 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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