The chart below gives information about Someland s main exports in 2005 2015 and future projections for 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows products for export, specified by some countries. The report includes three main items as meat, dairy products and international tourism.

According to the data about meat products, the highest rate of export was in 2005. Following the next ten years, the export slightly dropped, leaving the incomes on less of $4 billion. However, the projection for 2025 shows that the rate will continue to drop in the same direction.

As for dairy products export, the diagram represents the lowest rate in 2005 when the revenues from the export were $5 billion. However, this trend didn't last for a long period and we have already in 2015 a serious increase in the dairy export. The chart shows that collected money was nearly doubled than in the previous decade. Furthermore, the projections for the next 10 years consider a slight drop of dairy export as well as in the revenues.

Finally, international tourism didn't stay away from the aforementioned items. The diagram represents the lowest export in 2005 when tourism brought something more than $6 billion. In the next ten years, tourism has encountered a slight increase, reaching the point of almost $7 billion. The projections for 2025 show that the increase will continue in the same direction.
Comparing the data about three main export components, we can see that meat products didn't contribute to the economy of some lands, while dairy products and international tourism have brought the serious revenues.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as for', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277153558052 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.10861423221 0.116061578633 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0861423220974 0.0759168565197 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411985018727 0.0366838410393 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00749063670412 0.0131127313244 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142322097378 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0337078651685 0.0379272487307 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62987270759 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0112359550562 0.0210936926555 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.142322097378 0.0948980150116 150% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112359550562 0.00437022459523 257% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00749063670412 0.00967000014798 77% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1479.0 1161.00487805 127% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.9 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18828451883 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36820083682 0.337110787985 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292887029289 0.247514529752 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209205020921 0.171178102325 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108786610879 0.112407865282 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62987270759 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485355648536 0.546246751206 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.171162247 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 8.93414634146 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0714285714 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9378934562 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 135.714022679 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.48048780488 675% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.3601315003 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.88095238095 2.94281807926 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343920906351 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116909797944 0.181151798455 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0533084793224 0.0850326197045 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.681619416905 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12220236699 0.157042692854 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175394162369 0.228904883108 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422690595522 0.108899403657 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443898245584 0.367819155151 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.149641236945 0.0812612215331 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244642687786 0.316326947829 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291693764419 0.0921553760075 32% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 7.1512195122 196% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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