Art is a form of expressing emotions or creativity. There are various forms of art such as performance art (Films, theatre) Literary Arts (Classics, literature) and Pictorial Art (Paintings, Sculptures) to name a few. Art depicts the cultural heritage and traditions of a country. It is true that, the present generation tends to value science, technology and business over arts.
Success, in the present day, is measured in terms of the monetary benefits and luxuries available. It is an undeniable fact that artists survive on a low income, until they achieve recognition, and an art takes up a huge amount of time to be completed. For instance, I have a friend, who is a struggling artist at the moment, and she lives in a small one room studio apartment to make ends meet. Moreover, Globalization has led people to believe that the future of the world is in the hands of science and technology. These two reasons, in my opinion, are the causes for lack of interest in the present generation towards art.
People need to be made aware of the rich culture which art attempts to project. Government should provide relief to artists and encourage young artists to exhibit their work by opening exhibitions free of cost. Schools should conduct competitions such as painting, theatre, dance, etc to spark the interests of the students. Workshops in theatre & as well as painting should be conducted to encourage young minds. Parents should take children to exhibitions and also inspire children to follow their passion and dreams.
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- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.What do you think are the causes of 56
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005 78
- Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings To what extent do you agree o disagree 74
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 92
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302083333333 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.149305555556 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0763888888889 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0173611111111 0.0501214627716 35% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0277777777778 0.0437548338989 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107638888889 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80771891799 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451388888889 0.0326793684256 138% => OK
Particles: 0.00347222222222 0.00163938923432 212% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138888888889 0.021408717616 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00694444444444 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1529.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97265625 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3828125 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3203125 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2109375 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12890625 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80771891799 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 70.8514844072 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2857142857 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7910171104 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 50.3169642857 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.25 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391046430499 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105990818046 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.062938251553 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531685539246 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0822393200858 0.148594505496 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158727135721 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073082544348 0.0742795772207 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317066473569 0.324371583561 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0344872913437 0.0638462369009 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279372699462 0.228012699653 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748954421388 0.058150111329 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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