Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Today we live in a world where tall buildings, smart phones, digital cameras, air travel, invitro fertilization, genetically modified seeds and “” are quotidian. Before a century all these ideas would seem crazy. And as all ludicrous ideas, these would have been criticized. Society would have thought that this buffoon can do better at writting fiction than invent. But today all this is not only possible but ubiquitous. Hence one can say that those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Take example of Elon Musk, who made sapce travel commercial. Before a decade this idea would seem absurd. But Elon had a well thought out plan. And hence he succeeded. He now aims to inventing affordable solar powered cars. He plans on first making a luxury solar powered car,that are hand crafted and only a rich few can afford. This would help him implement the idea without bearing huge losses. Then he plans to start big cars that are affordable to everyone, and then invent small cars that are economical. There are many critics for his ideas, but he will prove them wrong like he did before. It may take more time, he may find it hard to sell out a first few, but in the end he will leave a legacy that will help solve oil crisis and pollution.
When we think of great ideas, mahatma Gandhi also comes to mind. Who would have thought one could free his country from the britich rule with non-violence. There were critics a plenty for Gandhi. There were extrimist groups who never agreed with him. But eventually people so much believed in his ideas, that they protested the Britich Raj unarmed. There were grisly incidents, like the Jalianwala Bagh tragedy, where of hordes of people were shot in a conference hall, but that did not stop Gandhi from believing in his ideas. Eventually India was declared an independent nation.
Thus if one has a clear idea, he can picture it lucidly in his mind, and sedulously works to make it a reality, then there is little that critisms and doubts can do. If everybody were to abandon an idea because it was criticized, what new adventures we would take on? What new would we leave for the next generation to explore? Hence criticism and doubts are not only welcomed but encouraged, as they help make an abstract idea more concrete.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192796610169 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.186440677966 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0889830508475 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0529661016949 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0614406779661 0.0444667217837 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0783898305085 0.12292977631 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41067929332 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190677966102 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.00423728813559 0.0016655270985 254% => OK
Determiners: 0.0699152542373 0.0997080785238 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0423728813559 0.0249443105267 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0296610169492 0.0148568991511 200% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2380.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 415.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73493975904 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286746987952 0.366273622748 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214457831325 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127710843373 0.200843997647 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.089156626506 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41067929332 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 219.290929204 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568674698795 0.48968727796 116% => OK
Word variations: 67.3510638634 55.4138127331 122% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3703703704 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1152002334 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1481481481 141.124799967 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3703703704 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.37037037037 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 36.8161535029 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.01408450704 1.64882698954 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286197960664 0.391690518653 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0814075351426 0.123202303941 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102283280253 0.077325440228 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.368962427756 0.547984918172 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127173369461 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735089647563 0.161403998019 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155843927217 0.0892212321368 175% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.1662832919 0.385218514788 43% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.033743421601 0.0692045440612 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178077095342 0.275328986314 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110582191222 0.0653680567796 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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