The graph illustrates the approximate percentage of trips taken by men and women for various purposes by car in 2005. Overall, the highest number of car trips by both men and women were made for work purposes.
The largest portion of car trips made by men were for work purpose at slightly higher than 50%. Shopping and recreation contributed to around 10% subsequently. Visiting town and attending courses followed at around 8% trips. Other purposes such as Bank work, running errands and visiting friends were the least at less than 5%.
Similarly Women made a large portion of their car trips mainly for work purpose at under 40% followed by shopping at around 18%. Attending courses and running errands constituted to around 12% and 10% respectively while bank work led to around 8% of the car trips made.
In conclusion, while men made 50% car trips to work, women made 10% lesser at around 40%. However, women made more trips on the whole as compared to men for various purposes.
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? 61
- People succeed because of their hard work but some say it is something else that is significant for success How far do you agree with this statement Give some reasons from your personal knowledge or experience to support your stance 96
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exa 78
- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005 78
Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ends were the least at less than 5%. Similarly Women made a large portion of their car...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'similarly', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.335025380711 0.268076937826 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.121827411168 0.116061578633 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659898477157 0.0759168565197 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0304568527919 0.0366838410393 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00507614213198 0.0131127313244 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.187817258883 0.155750635184 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0558375634518 0.0379272487307 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47213536992 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253807106599 0.0210936926555 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0456852791878 0.0948980150116 48% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 997.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.9 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86470588235 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305882352941 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241176470588 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152941176471 0.171178102325 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0823529411765 0.112407865282 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47213536992 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.6888265526 49.3433353143 78% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8335897422 42.9750493124 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.689975730869 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 41.1176470588 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 3.67741935484 2.94281807926 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208264144418 0.418131533498 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.206442803506 0.181151798455 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131393934863 0.0850326197045 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.656637583769 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155292608114 0.157042692854 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111635668088 0.228904883108 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114788244013 0.108899403657 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419745701682 0.367819155151 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0767100002263 0.0812612215331 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161626041029 0.316326947829 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105530823905 0.0921553760075 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ends were the least at less than 5%. Similarly Women made a large portion of their car...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'similarly', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.335025380711 0.268076937826 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.121827411168 0.116061578633 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659898477157 0.0759168565197 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0304568527919 0.0366838410393 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00507614213198 0.0131127313244 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.187817258883 0.155750635184 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0558375634518 0.0379272487307 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47213536992 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253807106599 0.0210936926555 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0456852791878 0.0948980150116 48% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 997.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.9 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86470588235 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305882352941 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241176470588 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152941176471 0.171178102325 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0823529411765 0.112407865282 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47213536992 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.6888265526 49.3433353143 78% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8335897422 42.9750493124 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.689975730869 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 41.1176470588 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 3.67741935484 2.94281807926 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208264144418 0.418131533498 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.206442803506 0.181151798455 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131393934863 0.0850326197045 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.656637583769 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155292608114 0.157042692854 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111635668088 0.228904883108 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114788244013 0.108899403657 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419745701682 0.367819155151 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0767100002263 0.0812612215331 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161626041029 0.316326947829 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105530823905 0.0921553760075 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.