Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create?. What are the possible solutions? (revised)
To enjoy life is one of main purpose of living. In identical period, the society’s desire to achieve favorable career and family life is a must. The primary problem of this phenomena is that, our laborers suffer from burn out. It is suggested that the most viable solution is to educate human beings about attempting to focus on the management in their life.
The most obvious problem associated with reaching a successful career and family life is exhaustion and horrible frustration. That is to say that people have restricted time and endowment to use in their daily life. For instance, according to research from University of Tokyo, in 2010, 80% of citizens who live in Jakarta, Indonesia accomplish their undone-jobs in their leisure period. This results in psychological stress and repulsive cynicism being suffered by employees.
A long term solution to this predicament is to cultivate wage-earner on undertaking focus management. Such a technique requires worker to focus and accomplish one task in one time. With this approach, people can accomplish tasks done productively and efficiently. For example, In 2014, 70% of office-employees in Berlin, Germany can take joy in their family time and done their jobs excellently. Laborers should focus on one work at a time. What is more, their jobs are accomplished effectively and savor their "fun time" with their family.
In conclusion, having outstanding career and satisfying family life are desires of all human being. It is imperative that stakeholders and individuals should take this into consideration.
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- Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create?. What are the possible solutions? 61
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- Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create?. What are the possible solutions? (revised) 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... life is a must. The primary problem of this phenomena is that, our laborers suffer ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'what is more', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272413793103 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.158620689655 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0206896551724 0.0501214627716 41% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0413793103448 0.0437548338989 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127586206897 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.051724137931 0.0403226058552 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07792137651 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00344827586207 0.00163938923432 210% => OK
Determiners: 0.0586206896552 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172413793103 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00689655172414 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1592.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.368 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07792137651 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 57.9814221297 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.625 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7202600087 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.814263465372 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 45.625 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.046875 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249276299879 0.332605444948 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0920418558489 0.102741220458 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0455070860789 0.0668466124924 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492717571267 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113271889052 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998726482714 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505833999881 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331907019423 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104601313248 0.0638462369009 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167867280321 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202758709745 0.058150111329 35% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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