More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
What problems does this cause ?
What do you think are possible solutions?
Car is a such breakthrough in moving people. Buying new car, especially in developing countries, increase dramatically. Since this issue makes terrible air pollution problem, it is agreed that proper measure should be attempted, such as impose tremendous tax to the car owner, to tackle this problem.
As far as I am concerned, a great numbers of car makes horrible air pollution. This happens because car needs combustion of gasoline to make it maneuver. Not only is combustion producing energy to move, but also it is creating a horrible pollution that spread out into atmosphere. For instance, research from University of Shanghai in 2014 shows that 90% middle-age people who live in Shanghai, China cannot breath fresh air anymore. Since almost all people go to work by car, the air quality gradually gets worse over time. Therefore, it is agreed that terrible air pollution that caused by abundant of purchasing new car should be considered.
From that problem, the solution that should attempt is imposing great tax for car owner. Such solution will make people avoid purchasing new cars. For example, research from Nanyang Technological University in 2005 shows that there is about 80% decrease in purchasing new cars in Singapore. The research involved citizen who have middle-level income. Such result happens because government impose a great numbers of tax to car owner. So, Imposing big tax to car owner is excellent solution to overcome the problem.
In conclusion, purchasing automobile in developing countries is increasing extremely. As result of horrible, imposing big tax for car owner is a best way to overcome it. Therefore, that solution should be attempted.
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- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.What problems does this cause ?What do you think are possible solutions? 61
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause and the possible solutions? (revised) 76
- Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create?. What are the possible solutions? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282467532468 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.175324675325 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0551948051948 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0194805194805 0.0437548338989 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126623376623 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0649350649351 0.0403226058552 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86677433045 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292207792208 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00324675324675 0.00163938923432 198% => OK
Determiners: 0.0487012987013 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194805194805 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162337662338 0.011925033212 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1687.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 316.048096192 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24814814815 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411111111111 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314814814815 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266666666667 0.203846283523 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159259259259 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86677433045 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.0622156099 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4344922048 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.4814814815 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.8961038961 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114564511869 0.332605444948 34% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0907768496828 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0764411382485 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.443381266231 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120100023046 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504488085258 0.134430193775 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044788801961 0.0742795772207 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352051904034 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0345502401176 0.0638462369009 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090729858379 0.228012699653 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163343772012 0.058150111329 28% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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