As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
In school we were taught about the three basic necessities of life- Food, Shelter & Clothing. But I ask this question to myself “ Is that it?”. Of course not! The list needs to be broad with one more necessity, which is “Technology”. Every human, from students to professionals rely on technology. I agree that in this competitive and burgeoning world, the use of technology is must but using it to an errant level can definitely deteriorate the ability of human thinking.
Let us look first at the downfalls of depending on technology. Well, using technology in every aspect as possible is definitely remarkable but the question is “Do we really need it?” . Today even primary grade students are found using calculators to perform the basic mathematical operations. Well yes of course it does give you the precise and no-doubt correct answers. But solving basic mathematics by your own is more beneficial to the development of one’s mind and also emphasizes on the thinking ability of a person. So if even the primary grade students are found using calculators then the future of the world definitely will have people with great technical knowledge but poor thinkers and analysers.
On the other hand, technology has proven beneficial in finding errors and making the result or product much better than it ever was. For example, Earlier in the match of cricket it was sometimes difficult to judge for an Umpire on an appeal made by the Bowler or Batsman. And eventually sometimes it did result in a wrong decision. But today with the help of technology , following the appeal made by the player, the Umpire can easily take the help of 3rd Umpire who with the help of high definition cameras can give a more accurate decision. Well today not only in sports but the technology has a great impact on country’s defence, bank accounts, communication, etc. So dependence on technology is definitely important in this world.
Every industry today demands employees that are “smart” . Well the definition of “smart” is having the knowledge of technology along with intellectual skills. Playing piano manually and playing in a DAW(Digital Audio Workstation) is entirely different. Well yea I agree that most of the prominent musicians today use the DAW for music production. But the prior knowledge of manually playing piano is important. A music is no good when it results in randomly hitting notes in the DAW and making a melody. One should know how an engine works before using that engine.
In the end, technology and intellectuality in equal amounts is more beneficial than depending entirely on technology as total dependence on technology only deteriorates the thinking and analysing ability of a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...n school we were taught about the three basic necessities of life- Food, Shelter & Clothing. But ...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ion is 'Do we really need it?' . Today even primary grade students are ...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n. But today with the help of technology , following the appeal made by the player...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot only in sports but the technology has a great impact on country's defence...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nds employees that are 'smart' . Well the definition of 'smart&apo...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ellectual skills. Playing piano manually and playing in a DAWDigital Audio Workst...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'of course', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251893939394 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.138257575758 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852272727273 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0587121212121 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030303030303 0.0444667217837 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0473484848485 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1139038732 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0132575757576 0.030933414821 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0984848484848 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113636363636 0.0249443105267 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0094696969697 0.0148568991511 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2776.0 2732.02544248 102% => OK
No of words: 453.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12803532009 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353200883002 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278145695364 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216335540839 0.200843997647 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167770419426 0.132149295362 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1139038732 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518763796909 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 59.9978660372 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4230769231 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1553798727 59.4972553346 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 45.2376464595 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.86666666667 1.64882698954 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321066543817 0.391690518653 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0616257504637 0.123202303941 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0610016792866 0.077325440228 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457669665226 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169288934123 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106771635317 0.161403998019 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724464321569 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.387934495252 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0955770823231 0.0692045440612 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230625632089 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618339006259 0.0653680567796 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.